I reflected in my video that people weren't very pleased with the new locations of where my SurfsUp company was locating, which I didn't understand much due to me giving them the best customer service and providing them with new locations like they had asked. Based on the feedback I decided to change locations once again.
Ok Alexa this was just awesome. You are so vibrant and energetic, I smiled the entire time watching your pitch. How can I not gain interest with your enthusiasm?! I like the idea and especially how you've taken something that you love and created a business out of it. Also, I like how you're targeting both men and women. I would think store locations would be great in any area close to the surf! Keep thinking global! Good luck and here's a link to my blog post: http://generationxonfleek.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3-its-about-efficiency.html
Great job overall with being relatable and enthusiastic about your surfs up clothing line. I agree with Joanne, targeting both men and women will boost your market as well as sales down the road, so great job thinking outside of the box to maximize profit and not be so narrow minded. My only suggestion would be to wear more business appropriate clothes when giving a sales pitch so people can really see the executive side of you, but I really did enjoy how relatable you were with your language. I wish you the best of luck as you explore your venture. Here is the link to my final elevator speech: http://entrepreneurshipleslie.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hi Alexa! Although I do not know where your original locations were, I think it is great that you chose to relocate them. Doing so shows that you truly do care about your customer service and giving customers what they want, which will ultimately satisfy them. I think you did a great job in your video! I would share my post with you but I did not complete this in time. Good job, and keep up the great work!
Certainly the best elevator pitch I've watched yet! Absolutely love the concept of your company! Wish I would surf! Really enjoyed your enthusiasm and hand movements! Kept me entertained and interested! Looks like you did an incredible jab at attacking your past critiques! I, unfortunately, did not do this assignment but I have several other posts on my blog!
Please feel free to check out my blog at the following link: http://efp13.blogspot.com/
Hi, Alexa! Great job with your elevator pitch! You've had more enthusiasm in yours than any other pitch I've seen. I do like the concept of your company and I think it would be successful seeing as it caters to both men and women on either coasts. Also, like scp1995 said, the fact that you've altered your idea shows that you do care about what the customers want which is always good when starting a company. Nicely done! Unfortunately, I did not complete this assignment, but if you want to check out the rest of my blog you can: http://nika-uf-ent3003.blogspot.com
First of all, I loved the energy you put into this pitch, but I wish you would have been a little less vague. For example, you saying you now have two stores, one on the East and one on the West coast really doesn't tell us anything. Also, remember that the customer is almost never wrong so if someone is telling you something doesn't fit maybe some changes need to be made somewhere in the design instead of just saying it's not your fault. Keep up the great work and check out my post at http://zanesufblog.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
I think you had so much enthusiasm and excitement for your company! That is always a good thing. In my opinion, I think it is best to start in a few closely located locations instead of trying to branch out all over the country or world. It makes managing your locations easier. I agree with ZTaylorUF that the customer is almost never wrong. Unfortunately, I did not complete this assignment but here is a link to my blog http://eastonmcginty.blogspot.com
Interesting concept. You may have to look into the name and trademark for this company, as you may find that the name SurfsUp has already been taken. Let me ask you though, what makes your company different? There are many surf related clothing companies that make apparel for both men and women-- what is different about your design, branding, or marketing strategy?
Ok Alexa this was just awesome. You are so vibrant and energetic, I smiled the entire time watching your pitch. How can I not gain interest with your enthusiasm?! I like the idea and especially how you've taken something that you love and created a business out of it. Also, I like how you're targeting both men and women. I would think store locations would be great in any area close to the surf! Keep thinking global! Good luck and here's a link to my blog post: http://generationxonfleek.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3-its-about-efficiency.html
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ReplyDeleteGreat job overall with being relatable and enthusiastic about your surfs up clothing line. I agree with Joanne, targeting both men and women will boost your market as well as sales down the road, so great job thinking outside of the box to maximize profit and not be so narrow minded. My only suggestion would be to wear more business appropriate clothes when giving a sales pitch so people can really see the executive side of you, but I really did enjoy how relatable you were with your language. I wish you the best of luck as you explore your venture. Here is the link to my final elevator speech: http://entrepreneurshipleslie.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hi Alexa! Although I do not know where your original locations were, I think it is great that you chose to relocate them. Doing so shows that you truly do care about your customer service and giving customers what they want, which will ultimately satisfy them. I think you did a great job in your video! I would share my post with you but I did not complete this in time. Good job, and keep up the great work!
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ReplyDeleteCertainly the best elevator pitch I've watched yet! Absolutely love the concept of your company! Wish I would surf! Really enjoyed your enthusiasm and hand movements! Kept me entertained and interested! Looks like you did an incredible jab at attacking your past critiques! I, unfortunately, did not do this assignment but I have several other posts on my blog!
Please feel free to check out my blog at the following link:
http://efp13.blogspot.com/
Hi, Alexa! Great job with your elevator pitch! You've had more enthusiasm in yours than any other pitch I've seen. I do like the concept of your company and I think it would be successful seeing as it caters to both men and women on either coasts. Also, like scp1995 said, the fact that you've altered your idea shows that you do care about what the customers want which is always good when starting a company. Nicely done! Unfortunately, I did not complete this assignment, but if you want to check out the rest of my blog you can: http://nika-uf-ent3003.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteHi Alexa,
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I loved the energy you put into this pitch, but I wish you would have been a little less vague. For example, you saying you now have two stores, one on the East and one on the West coast really doesn't tell us anything. Also, remember that the customer is almost never wrong so if someone is telling you something doesn't fit maybe some changes need to be made somewhere in the design instead of just saying it's not your fault. Keep up the great work and check out my post at http://zanesufblog.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hello Alexa,
ReplyDeleteI think you had so much enthusiasm and excitement for your company! That is always a good thing. In my opinion, I think it is best to start in a few closely located locations instead of trying to branch out all over the country or world. It makes managing your locations easier. I agree with ZTaylorUF that the customer is almost never wrong. Unfortunately, I did not complete this assignment but here is a link to my blog
http://eastonmcginty.blogspot.com
Interesting concept. You may have to look into the name and trademark for this company, as you may find that the name SurfsUp has already been taken. Let me ask you though, what makes your company different? There are many surf related clothing companies that make apparel for both men and women-- what is different about your design, branding, or marketing strategy?
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